Today I met family in a quiet cemetery in London to bury the ashes of my dad’s big sister. It was a mild day that felt like September, when in fact it’s November next week. I wore thermal socks and regretted it all afternoon. Death is everywhere, isn’t it. This feels like a trite thing to say in autumn, as we kick leaves up with every step. But then trees are good at death. Humans less so.
I am thinking about grief again, as if I were ever not thinking about it. Almost everyone got lost among the seemingly endless headstones, but I was late, so by the time I arrived most were joking about it, stood as we were by the correct graves, close to the entrance to the cemetery. Some of us were awkward, and I sensed as ever the undercurrents of family politics that I do not understand, that perhaps I was a little too young to witness. I always feel a prickle of guilt, too, knowing how difficult my father could be, and feeling fairly sure he did various things to upset various people. Again, politics I missed.
I am also grieving, I think, a book. I could be wrong, it may not be dead, but it feels like grief all the same. I wrote a novel last year, a short, dreamy, somewhat structureless and poetic novel. It was only when a dear friend asked me about grief and my creative process that it dawned on me that it’s a book about grief.
In recent months I have been submitting this novel to literary agents. A strange and vulnerable process where the writer must have a thick skin and be prepared for rejections along the way, while also believing enough in the project to stand by it. In the past month, three of those agents requested the full manuscript to read. This made me sick with excitement and nerves, obviously. I sent my little book off, my little Kingfisher, and braced myself. The first responded with a no. A kind no, a no which left the door open for future projects, as other agents have in the past (a very good sign, I’m told). This agent misunderstood something about the novel which feels intrinsic to me. Something I could stand by. The grief of it all. But not just that. The lack of resolution. The loose ends, the frayed edges that death creates.
I began writing Kingfisher almost exactly a year after my father died. The story welled up from the depths of my psyche during a period when I lost my father, a childhood friend, and my Auntie Pat all within a relatively short space of time. I’d hit that point, a point we all reach eventually one way or another, when suddenly people can disappear. Death is everywhere.
Once I’d pulled myself from the funk of immediate grief, the voice of my protagonist came to me. He’s not a particularly nice man, although I love him. He is flawed and broken and damaged as we all are. He falls in love and then he watches her die. That’s it, really. He doesn’t learn any fundamental lessons. He doesn’t become less selfish, or at least not in the window through which we see him in the book. I think my writing is and always will be interested in rawness. I’m concerned with that middle place, the haze of experience before a person has time to understand it, to grow from it. The journey, not the destination, if you’ll permit me the cliché.
Auntie Pat loved yellow. Today her ashes were held in a container covered in sunflowers. Yellow and black rosary were placed on top before we added soil. Her daughter stole sunflowers to place by the grave. Yellow is the colour of hope, and in Kingfisher my protagonist fills his lover’s rooms with sunflowers. He likens his friend Jessica to a daffodil, because she is always there, symbolising the potential for newness to grow from barren ground. I have always been ambivalent (at best) about Coldplay, and Chris Martin seems like a dick, but since she died I can’t listen to the song Yellow without sobbing. Look at the stars, look how they shine for you.
The second agent said no. This was a no so kindly and well thought out, and a no that so clearly saddened her to say that I cried for two hours. My dog licked the tears from my cheeks. She gave me valuable feedback which I can use to improve the novel, if indeed it turns out to still be alive. She didn’t understand Jess, my character’s friend, the daffodil, and this fact alone is enough to reassure me that she is correct to not want to represent me. My protagonist is the rawness of turned earth. His friend is the yellow in his darkness.
My uncle Tony, Pat’s husband, has dementia. When I walked up to greet him he stuck out his hand for me to shake.
Hello, I’m Tony, he said.
I took his hand in both of mine. Hello Tony, I said.
Oh aren’t you lovely and warm! he said. How lucky, how very lucky.
Later in the afternoon he gave me a bear hug and thanked me for coming. I’m not sure he knew who I was then, either, but I realised it didn’t matter in the slightest.
Pat’s ashes have been laid to rest alongside her parents. My father’s father died when dad was just six. I knew he’d been young but it still shocked me to see that he’d been just 30. Younger than me by three years. Nana died when I was a child, exactly when I can’t quite remember, but I had a whole childhood of her. Giggly Nana, we called her. She used to let me suck the lemon slice from her gin and tonic. Yellow again.
I’ve not yet heard back from the third agent. I am most terrified of her response because I really like her. She’s around my age, she likes interesting, different books. She understood my protagonist and joked with me about him. If she says no to me, which I am suspecting she will (as I am worried the book has died) I know I will grieve.
Watching my auntie be laid to rest with her family made me a little uneasy about the choices we made with my father’s ashes. We had him split so all four siblings could have some, as well as his sisters. Whether everyone got their share I am still unsure. I think I pushed for this, because selfishly I wanted him, some of him, for myself. My share sits on my kitchen shelf. I chat to him in the mornings while I make coffee. I had a ring made so I can have him with me. And I regularly scatter him all over the place. I have become familiar with opening the plastic bag and using a teaspoon to decant him into a small Tupperware. I’ve taken him to his favourite cove in Cornwall, thrown him into the froth at the sea’s edge. I’ve shown him my favourite walks, the river running through the town I live in. Eventually, when I have the ingredients of time, funding, and courage at my disposal I will be taking him across the world, retracing his steps with the RAF and writing about him, about his life. I told my cousins about the project today, panic rising in my chest as I did so, and they smiled. Thought we should all plan a trip together.
In Kingfisher my protagonist and his friend Jess, his daffodil, travel around the country searching for a place to scatter his mother’s ashes.
Today, my cousin told me that my grandfather’s parents were elsewhere in the city of headstones. We didn’t have chance to find them, so I’ll have to go back again. The Italian side. The reason we all tan so well. When we went for lunch afterwards I kept staring at everyone’s faces, tracing the different trails of lineage with my eyes. The olive skin. The thick hair, the roman noses. Lots of hazel eyes, I realised. My eyes are brown like my father’s, although he used to describe his as black, whereas mine are more toffee. My brother’s eyes are blue like our mum, except for a bloom in his left iris of brown/green/yellow, depending on how the light hits it.
As with all of my writing (for better or worse) this piece has no resolution. Today I wanted to ask about all the family secrets, but knew I couldn’t. I wanted to hug everyone as tightly as I could, but only did so with the people I knew would welcome it. I wanted to see every picture ever taken of all of us, to see everyone as babies and teenagers and at weddings and christenings. I wanted to look back along the family line for all the black and brown and hazel eyes. To find someone else who has a bloom of yellow in their eye, just like my brother does.